I’ve saved a few cover letters in Bayt.com that I use when applying for a job in Dubai. Not much luck up until now on getting feedback, the response rate is quite low, which got me thinking that I might just need to improve them.
I must admit I haven’t thought it over in detail.. actually I built these when I got sick and tired of creating a different cover letter for every job I applied, which have certainly been a few. Felt that doing a new cover letter for each was being quite unproductive and also that some times I forgot to include something, which might decrease my chances of getting a reply.
My cover letters all look pretty much the same, I have two templates I use and I just adjust the job I’m applying to, and maybe a paragraph if there is something specific I want to add about that job.
Here it is, let me know what you think. Don’t hold yourself, do let me know your honest opinion, help me improve it!
Template 1 – Project/Program Manager:
Hi,
saw your opening for a __________. My career has been rich in project and program management as you can see in my CV which I’m sending attached.
Since I left college, almost 10 years ago, I have been responsible for increasingly larger projects, and in the last 5 years also for program management.
Being quite skilled at this, I’m currently doing precisely doing the job you describe, a “___________”, being responsible for program management of an entire new area in my current company, where I’m Program Manager for Internationalization Expansion.
This is currently the larger and most important program in the company (a 30,000 employee company, with revenues over 4 billion dollar annually).
I’m currently looking for opportunities abroad, as I would like to internationalize my career, and I’m ready for a quick relocation.
Thank you in advance for your time, I’ll be looking forward for a positive answer.
Best regards,
and Template 2 – IT Manager:
Hi,
saw your opening for a IT Director. My career has evolved in IT management as you can see in my CV which I’m sending attached.
Since I finished my IT Engineering Degree, almost 10 years ago, I have been responsible for increasingly larger IT areas, and in the last 2 years head of the entire E-Commerce IT Management.
My current responsabilities include Product Management, Program Management and Service Management. I have a very clear vision of IT as a service for supporting business, being a certified ITIL Manager, so customer focus is my primary way of work, assuring a clear understanding of business needs, and working with internal and outsourcing teams in finding the best cost effective solutions.
Being quite skilled at my work, I’m also responsible for the strategic vision of IT architecture, where I’m currently Program Manager for the single largest program underway in the company (30,000 employees company, with over 4 billion revenues yearly), the International Expansion Program.
I also have strong communication skills, and I’m able to establish good networks with the surrounding environment. I’m currently responsible for setting and maintaining University partnerships for R&D and recruiting.
I’m currently looking for opportunities abroad, as I would like to internationalize my career, and I’m ready for a quick relocation.
Thank you in advance for your time, I’ll be looking forward for a positive answer.
Best regards,
Well, there you go, your turn now
By the way, thank you for all the feedback on the Resumes, I’m finishing up all the changes you suggested, hopefully will be done and updated here by today.
Cheers!